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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细。
the Impact of Infromation Explosion I t is ture to say that we are in a time of information explosion now. You can receive millions of information which cover different fields just in one day, from your mobile ,your comouter, your tv and so on. I do think the impact of information explosion is two-side of one coin to us. one side, we can learn some new things so quickly and so easily. For excample, if you do not know how to do a course for your family, you just can search in the website and following the steps showed in the website, just like a professioal chef is teaching you. It is so easy and cheap to learn new things , you can think you are a weathy person! But at the other side, we can aware of the negative impact from information explosion. it is so much information which can be accessible so easily, one seems to be easily distracted at the same time. you are used to neglect some meaning information, and will be easy to distracted from what you are learing! There are some useful measures to help one who are easily to be distracted in a time of information explosion. Firsly, you must keep in your mind that it is your time to searching on the internet or reading some leisure story just after you finish your due work. Secondly, you can let your mobile phone in a silent mode when you concentrate on something; Thirdly, you can limit your internet time in a set time so you must do what you should do in a first place. Try to enjoy the richful information and pay attention on what you should do!
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