作者在高级词汇方面还有很大的空间,还要注意单词拼写;从句使用量太少;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
There are three ridiculous things in the world.First,you taken your parents money and sing the song'my parents are very hard'in KTV.Second,you said money is no easy to earn.but you take money to buy wine.The last one.you cuted up the trees ang used then make the newspaper and write that'we should protect the trees,we should defend our environment'.it's so funny Forest is very important for us.Without it we can not have fresh air and beautiful sence.It is necessary for our life.Everyone know this truth.But alone with the developping economy.More and more trees have been cup down by people.Lead to 'Global warming'and damage 'the water cycle'.it's a bad influence. For my view, i thing that government should be maked some law about peotect treess and improve the cityzen's awareness of protect trees.let them kown how improtant to protect trees.