2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题TASK2

希望作者高级词汇的使用能更熟练，另外要认真检查拼写；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；文章层次较为清晰。

Recent years, with an increasingly climing number of young people surging into all major cities pursuing a better life, the standard of city life is far behind than it used to be. The cause of declining quality of all metropolitans owing to several reasons. First, a great increasing population foresees it's consequence as the pollution rate going rocket high. With numerous cars driving on the road, the air pollution is getting worse and worse by the clock.Competiton triples when there are competitors all around the cities leading to young people's umemployment and poor drive crimes. There's more, all want to get a better surviving by trying so hard to manage a life in the city,however, the living cost in major cities ofter over runs citizen's earning pay. For one to work in cities, he has to rent an apartment to settle down which cost a fortune for the young who has no working experience and with a slim salary every month. Furthermore, the city life is not as fun either. Busy working schedules and pierce competion eats away people's interpersonal encounters leading to the isolation of individual. Then what may undo this decling quality of life in the city. By moving its citizens to smaller cities would be one of the solutions. Encouraging factories to be build out of the city might attract part of the umemployment. Of course, city itself should promote the relationship between its citizens better than before by creating more community activites. With efforts, i believe we could look forward to the life lay out for us in the furture.