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文章用词灵活多样，高级词汇使用也比较准确；文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句。
In recent years , as our world becoming increasingly interconnected ,globalization has come into focus ,generating considerable impact on the social science,humanities ,policy circles and so on. Traditional culture is at the center of them .This essay will describe in terms both positive and negative aspects. Globalization has bought some benefits to traditional culture . Just like language ,as globalization developing , more an more people begin to study English.These people who speak English well could communicate with each other easily. People use English could get more information , knowledge ,friendship from other countries . Furthermore , the developing of economics has been promoted by globalization . For example , some developed countries encourage their local companies to build factories in some developing countries, which can help them save more money and get more skillful people. At the same time , some people who do not have jobs in these developing countries could get good jobs because of these job opportunities created by the factories of other countries’s. However,there are also some drawbacks in globalization.As some American food such as KFC,pizza and son becoming popular , traditional food in some countries is disappearing. For example, in China,youth prefer fast food than moon cakes and the have been used to using some other countries’ food to replace traditional food such as dumplings , rice dumplings or look cakes in some special festivals, which may lead young people to forget their traditional culture . In addition , globalization also brings a plenty of disadvantages to education. For example, the education systems in many developing countries continue mimicking and often mechanically copying and borrow curricula , teaching methods an assessment tests from other developed countries . These countries are losing their traditional values and ways of education. In conclusion, there are both positive and negative aspects in globalization ,but which will go to continue and strengthen. Therefore, governments and people should balance both of them and promote the world and their lives better
