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As the poverb goes,you should think before leap. Living the information age full of changes,we should definitely not jump to conclusion upon seeing or hearing something.Confronted with various kinds of information,modern people tend to trust whatever they have heard or read However, we should know that information cannot be trusted until it is checked. It is evident that some infoemation is so misleading that we should not believe it. For instance,duo to the nuclear leakage in Japan , a host of people,especially the seniors,rushed to buy salt,which was very ridiculous. Although it is generally accepted that a picture is worth 1000 words,some picture cannot trusted in this day and age.for PhotoShop has prevailed around the world. In conclusion,it is imperative for people to form a correct attitude towards the information they see or hear.We should not draw conclusion in a hurry.People should be educated to raise awareness of judging right from wrong.I firmly believe a better future is awaiting us if we make every decision upon considerate thinking.
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