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作者高级词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇丰富度要加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章层次较为清晰。
Saving is the traditional Chinese virtues.In my opinion,saving money is a good habit,not only for kids,but for adults. There are so many people seeking luxuries that the phenomenon of abusing money is worse.Nodoubtly,it is necessary to save money now.Saving money helps people avoid using it arbitrarily.Saving more money is to do more significant things，for example,helping more peopel out of poor or sicking. It is significant for students to save money.The money,saved in peacetime,also will be a foundation of traveling.What's more,if you want to study in other country,the money will help you. On the other hand,it can make parents relaxed in economy and release thier stress. In a word,saving money gives us many advantages than disadvantages.
