2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章词汇表达稍显呆板，请灵活使用高级词汇，避免拼写错误。

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