2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

句式多变，多多练习从句的使用；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文章用词太过单一，另外请作者加强单词拼写的检查。

Nothing succeeds without a strong will,a strong will gurantee to succeeds,the great person have a strong will,student is the same with great person,we want to study hard,strong will is imporant for us in study life,anyway we have a difficult in doing something,it is necessary for us,we often to occur on difficult thing,we should be overcome it,and try my best to do it,only we try to do best thing,and we have a strong will in us heart,I believe in that we will be succeed,and then we will be as useful with knowlege of person for society.