2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外还需加强拼写检查。

Nothing succeeds without a strong will,a strong will gurantee to succee,the great person has a strong will,student is the same with great person,we want to study hard,strong will is imporant for us in study life,anyway we have a difficult in doing something,it is necessary for us,we often to occur on difficult thing,we should be overcome it,and try my best to do it,only we try to do best thing,and we have a strong will in us heart,I believe in that we will be succeed,and then we will be as useful with knowlege of person for society.