2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

As for my hometown,it is a beautiful and ancient city,Anqing,where there are located at mid of China,south-east of Anhui province.Although it is not as famous as Shanghai or Beijing, you can enjoy a beautiful and peaceful countryside life over there. It must be saying the Tianzhushan scenery is a typical place.If you like hiking or climbing, it is wonderful for you.In fact,it is also a historical interest.There are so many recording of history on the mountains,I think it would be a good way to know some story about history and help you to understand a lots of Chinese culture.And it is more important that you can feel the peace ,release your stress of work or study and rethink your life.