2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错。

It must be saying the Tianzhushan scenery is a typical place.If you like hiking or climbing, it is wonderful for you.In fact,it is also a historical interest.There are so many recording of history on the mountains,I think it would be a good way to know some story about history and help you to understand a lots of Chinese culture.And it is more important that you can feel the peace ,release your stress of work or study and rethink your life.