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题目要求：
Some people belive everyone has the right to get university education，to what extent do you agree government should make it free to all people no matter of their financial background?
写作思路：
第一段：引入话题
第二段：当然每个人都有权利接受教育，
1 教育提高人们的工作能力
2 高等教育为社会培养综合型专业人才，促进社会的持续发展
3政府的税收中教育应该占重要部分
第三段：但是
1 并非社会要求每个人都必须是综合型专业人才,对技术工人的需要更大
2 政府在基础教育上已经投入大量财力，即使富裕的发达国家也无法支付所有大学生的学费
3 学生在大学所学的知识帮助他们就业，即学生本人也从大学学习中获得直接利益，因此应该负担一部分学费。
第四段：大学学费应该视学生的经济状况决定收费方式，贫困学生应该得到国家的财政补贴或无息贷款，帮助他们完成大学课程
词汇拓展：
1. consensus 共识
2. controversial 有争议的
3. as long as 只要
4. willing n. 意愿
5. imposes tax 征税
6. allocate 分配
7. equip…with…使…具备…
8. specialized knowledge 专业知识
9. sustainable development 可持续发展
10. ensure 确保
11. in reality= in fact 实际上
12. affluent 富裕的
13. tertiary education= university education= higher education 高等教育
14. on top of = besides除了
15. compulsory education义务教育
16. skilled workers 技术工人
17. perspective 视角
18. in terms of 在…方面
19. academic knowledge 学术知识
20. empower 使…有能力
21. be employed 就业
22. independent economically经济独立
23. life learning skills 终生学习的能力
24. theoretical subject 理论课
25. Accordingly 因此
26. carry responsibility 承担责任
27. fund 资助
28. of great significance= significant 重大的
29. pragmatic 实际的
30. interest-free loan无息贷款
31. outstanding 优秀的
32. tuition fee 学费
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可适当增加几条从句；文章词汇表达丰富，不过拼写检查还需加强。
With a definite answer to the question of whom should pay the first and secondary education for citizens, we are now facing the controversial one as to whom should be responsible for the college tuition fee. Higher education offers its society a wide range of elites coming from different fields,from which both individual and the country are benefiting. For individual development, further education guranttees a better career prospect which leads to ecomomical independence. Not only does college make individual more independent, it provides one life learnig skills. As for the societies, universities promote unique merits which are appreciated in different societies respectively in order to make law abiding citizens by providing those good behavior individuals. Furthermore, those expects in various fields graduated from colleges push the society to develop. Though higher education is vital to a country or a society, only a number of countries are able to cover the payment for its people's tuition fee for college including developed countries. Therefore, it is unwise to throw all the government money to create shools with free education leaving other needs aside. Instead, i believe it is more practical for the government to provide interest-free loan to those outstanding students who couldn't afford tuition for their college.
