2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Attitudes towards Work Most people must try their best to go to work. Only work can they obtain money. And they can meet various demands of life.For example, eating, wearing, living, and bringing up children depend on money. At the same time, in general, if the harder you work, the more money you gain. Many people work for work,because they make the salary as the judgment criteria. However,I think that work occupied most of th