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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
From the above picture we can know a lot of people don't like mach .I don't think this is a good phenomenon.because mach contact with our life.Let me tell you the advantage of mach. First,Mach can improve our intelligence and make us become a wise men.second,how mach common our life.Such as.buidling house,manufacturing product and accounting and so on.last one,Nowadays,the mach genius absence the job market.if you good at mach well,you will find a good job. How importance mach is.we must pay more attention to it
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