托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但高级词汇稍显不足；从句和复杂句用的不错，但部分句子还有一些小问题。

as the saying goes, "no pains, no gains." with the hard work, we will have results. unearned thing is non-existent. yes,diligence belongs to the person who treasure and cherish time,belongs to the person who keep his feet on the ground,belongs to the person who has the spirit of persistence and perseverance,belongs to the person who has the courage to explore and innovate. because of diligence, chinese ancient people left us great topics about cutting the wall to steal light and rising up upon hearing the crow of a rooster to practise sword playing; and it also due to diligence,kobe bryant became one of history's most famous NBA superstar everyone has his own aspiration, and it's perhaps ambitious, perhaps trivial. therefore, only if we study hard with diligence and determined to be a useful man,can we make our dreams come true,can we lighten the hope of motherland's future.