2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；有效的运用了一些复杂句；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

It's says that haveing a strong will is the key element to success.As we know, there are many unpredict and unvisible challenge in the path to the goal,what shall i do ?if we meet falure ,if we feel tried and want to give up ?At that point ,holding our will,makeing sure it strong is the best way .The study is the same thing ,only more harder we study ,we could be a useful man and to come ture our dream,achieve our goal.