托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写做的很好。

Diligence As the saying goes, "no pains, no gains." with the hard work, we will have results. Unearned thing is non-existent. Yes,diligence belongs to the person who treasures and cherishes time,belongs to the person who keeps his feet on the ground,belongs to the person who has the spirit of persistence and perseverance,belongs to the person who has the courage to explore and innovate. Because of diligence, The Chinese ancient people left us great topics about cutting the wall to steal light and rising up upon hearing the crow of a rooster to practise sword playing; and it also due to diligence,Kobe Bryant became one of history's most famous NBA superstar. Kobe has won five NBA championships, this is Bryant's ambitions and goals, it’s also the reason why he can become a great player.” I want to express that if any player wants to be great in his basketball career, he must be kept train,training, and retraining, there is no shortcut.” One reporter of US asked to Kobe before, “what made you achieve success?” Kobe Bryant smiled and asked,” Have ever seen the scene of Los Angeles at 4am? I see often, because I have been starting training at that time.” Everyone has his own aspiration, and it's perhaps ambitious, perhaps trivial. Therefore, only if we study hard with diligence and determined to be a useful man,can we have our dreams come true,can we lighten the hope of motherland's future. Rome was not built in a day, the same as success. for our dear parents who bring us up,for our dear teachers who educate us, and also for our own bright future,it's time for all of us to change and perfect ourselves! Today I stand here, not to lead you to shout slogans,diligence and self-determined,is not just a shouting slogan, but a real action.without hesitation, act now! We need to grasp our future in our own hands firmly! from today on, no, from this moment on, as the students, we set our own direction, and pursue it step by step ,and devote ourselves to our school, our society and our mother land!!! My speech is over.thank you!