2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦167:钢琴家

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occupation pianist experiences He was born in 1982 in chenyang of China. He began to learn playing the piano when he was 3 years old. He went to American to learn music when he was 14. achevements He has given the concerts all over the world. And he has performed with lots of famous musican. He has won plenty of prizes. He makes great efforts to his success. And his father gave up his own job to support his son's career. I think no one can success without such a great many of effort. I like his performance. It makes me feel peaceful. And it will stimulate me to further effort of myself.