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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12900
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分67.0分
评语:

行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;采用了一些简单的从句;作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As the picture saw above,the mother and the father are writing to they kid implying their missing.But the kid is up stairs,the parents are down stairs.It is knowledgeble that many family discover this phenomenon.however,the kids are wrong. Computer is have made door to door,many children use it playing games,chating,seeing movies and so on.Hardly kids use it lerning some useful information,while their parent don't refuse it,which leading kids to a wrong road. From this reason we can know,parents and children need communicating.Computer should be restrict.

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