2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮。

In the modern,busy and fast-paced society.it has become prevailing and prevalent for individuals to excessive package,when taking a glance around,we can easily find a sea of goods in packaging excessive for sell. What, you may wonder, can account for this phenomenon,on my personal level,two forcing factors contribute to it.To begin with,the reason why citizen like beautify goods is no other than the fact that goods, excessive packaging,are accepted,so selling will growth.In addition,the phenomenon is closely relate to give friend as gift. From my point of view,excessive packaging is consume energy and water.solving this problem is every necessity,we need to build up consumers aware that excessive packaging harm for our life.On the condition that we made no reflection on this current situation,we will be the victims of our own crimes.