题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。
On maintaining trust Trust is a word which is widely known,it is also an essential rules that make friends with others.Keeping trust is respect for othera the same with ourselves. As we all know,all of us will become unbelieving without trust,which will make our life become very worse,we will be annoyed because of don't trust others.Then,we will be negative so that cannot with normal life.What's worse,the distance of people will farther,everybody are immersed in themselves' world and others coming in are unallowed,besides,they are out of touch the world of others,which let us further behind and betrayed our wish for accord development. In a word, only keeping trust for others can our society developing more and more fast ang better and better,our life will change and we can live better.