2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

On maintaining trust Trust is a word which is widely known,it is also an essential rule that makes friends with others.Keeping trust is respect for others,so it is ourselves. As we all know,all of us will become unbelieving without trust,which will make our life become very worse,we will be annoyed because of don't trust others.Then,we will be negative so that cannot with normal life.What's worse,the distance of people will farther,everybody are immersed in themselves' world and others coming in are unallowed,besides,they are out of touch the world of others,which let us further behind and betrayed our wish for accord development. In a word, only keeping trust for others can our society developing more and more fast ang better and better,our life will change and we can live better.