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Today I'd like to introduce you to a very interesting nove written by Mark Twain. In the novel"The Million Pound Banknote",With humurous and sarcastic language,Mark Twain successfully depictated the fortuitous adventure of Henry ,a poor american lad in london .The story started with a bet between two rich men.They wanted to see what would become of Henry a month later after they gave him a million pound banknote wich could not be cashed.Unexpectedly,at the end of the month, Henry was neither starved or arrested.What is more,he even won the love of a beautiful lady and became a rich man himself. This is just a brief introduction of the novel,I hope you will read this representative work of the american famous writter Mark Twain.