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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

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On maintaining trust Trust is a word which is widely known,it is also an essential rule that makes friends with others.Keeping trusting is respect for others,so it is ourselves. It is universally acknowledged that all of us will become unbelieving without trust,which will make our life become worse,we will be annoyed because of not trust others.Then,we will be negative so that we cannot have normal living.What's worse,people's distance will farther,everybody is immersed in themselves' world and others coming in are unallowed,besides,they are out of touch others' world,which lets us further behind and betrayed our wish for accord development. In a word, only keeping trust for others can our society developing more and more fast and better and better,our life will change and we can live better.

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