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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；文中能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。
A really smart consumer As a student we dont have the sources of economic ,in mostly we depend on our parents ,if you dont want to be a burden of your paents,you should be a smart customer. Then how to be a smart customer？in my opinion we should arrange our money,and we also need control the desire of buying ,every students are eager to dress theirselvous,especially we usually cost many money on shopping,even we would rather save all money to buy clothes than eat.but it not reasonable . A smart consumer should keep a good habit ,we can buy clothes but we should clear kown what we need dont cost irreleant money,and we should learn independent try to so some part-time job ,although it not enough but we can use it buy some extra thing. Finally we should do a sensible consumer.
