小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

My good friend I have a good friend.Her name is Lily.She is tall and beautiful.We like each other very much.Her mom often says that we actually are twins.As you see,we friendship will keep forever.We are classmates,so we go to school together everyday.I love my little friend and trust she.I believe that she also loves me! That is my story. thank you very much!