文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;文章组织结构良好;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
My hometown In the past few years, my hometown was be around by trees, the fishes swimming in the clear river, the house are simple, the street is narrow, people hard working, the life are simple and poor. Nowadays, high building be standing in everywhere, street are full of all kinds of cars. the environment became worse by industry development, the tree have been reducing, the fish disappearing ,it is so emergency to solve the pollution problem.