2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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On account of the development of science and technology, computer is more and more closely associated to man. We may feel uncomfortable without computer in our life. So is it a positive phenomenon? Diffrente people have diffrent opinions. On the one hand, some people think computer can make our life much easer and diligal. what's more, computer can reduce the cost in produce. On the other hand, the people who hold the oppersite view think computer may cause the negtive impact. The pupil may be addicted in computer games so that they may ignore their sdudy. Both of them are reasonable in a certain sence. But just in my opinion, i think we have to think about computer in the round. If we keep a positive attitude and don't abuse it. Computer can be a faverable part in our life.