2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达用的较灵活，同时能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

On account of the development of science and technology, computer is more and more closely associated to man. We may feel uncomfortable without computer in our life. So is it a positive phenomenon? Differente people have different opinions. On the one hand, some people think computer can make our life much easer and digital. What's more, computer can reduce the expense on production. On the other hand, the people who hold the opposite view think computer may cause the negative impact. The pupil may be addicted to computer games so that they may ignore their study. Both of them are reasonable in a certain sence. But just in my opinion, I think we have to think about computer from all sides. If we keep a positive attitude and don't abuse it. Computer can be a favorable part in our life.