2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Foshan，is my hometown,which is an old story city in China. There are many interesting places in Foshan,such as Xiaoqiao Mountain,Ancestral Temple and Qiandeng Lake.all of those interesting places have a long history in Foshan and those places have attracted many tourists to visit. After all,I want to introduce the most interesting one-the Ancestral Temple.Ancestral Temple was built in about 1078,and it has a long history for 937 years.When you come in this place,you will feel amazing about the ancestors of Foshan,they were so creative that they built the beautiful buildings in[ here.Above all,you will know the most develope history of Foshan after you go to visit the Ancestral Temple. So i recommed this place as the most interesting place that i introduce to my foreign friend.