2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；熟练使用了一些长难句；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

With the rapidly development of technology, the computer have extent into almost every scope of our life, we ues computer to look for information, to have lessons of our major, to relax oursulves by surfing the internet, to help the factory to enhance the manufacture level and make more ecomomy. so the use of computer have obviously benefit the human. however the view of computer, different people have different opinions. some people said that the large use of computer will lower the ability of human beings. we will more relay the computer to help us free from the factory, mine, computer, and even housework, thus if the occouring of computer will reduse the thinking and ability or not is still a queetion, which often argued by so many people. on the other hand, some people insist that the computer will just help us free from the hazardous surroudings, or it will help us to do some work which is supervised by human beings, the computer will save our time and vigor to do some more meanful things which will push us to a higher level of the whole history of human beings. in my opinions, the computer will help us to convient our life, and help us to do somethings more easier, give us a abundant space to to some more chanllages. in the same time, we also should relize that we can't satisfied with the achievement we have got, instead, we should keeping move and expand more unknown scopes, and push us to a higher level. and only in this way can we have a harmonious atmosphere with computer.