题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
文章结构清晰,有效地采用了多种衔接方法;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累。
With the development of technique, the computer has extent into almost every scope of our life, we use computer to look for information, to have lessons of our major, to relax ourselves by surfing the internet, to help the factory to enhance the level of production and make more revenue. So the use of computers has obviously brought so many benefits for mankind. However the view of computer, different people have different views. Some people saying that the use of computer will lower the ability of human beings, we will relay more on the computer to help us free from the factory, mine, computer, and even housework, thus if the emerging of computer will reduce the thinking and ability or not is still a question, which often argued by so many people. On the other hand, some people insist that the computer will just help us free from the hazardous surroundings, or it will help us to do some work which is supervised by human beings, the computer will save our time and vigor to do some more meaningful things which will push us to a higher level of the whole history of human beings. In my opinions, the computer will help us to convenient our life, and help us to do something much easier, give us an abundant space to to some more challenges. At the same time, we should also realize that we should not be content with the achievement we have got, instead, we should keep moving and expanding more unknown scopes, and push us to a higher level. Only in this way can we create a harmonious atmosphere with computers.