2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，高级词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

IF my friends are gonging to visit my hometown,I would like to take him/her to see the most interesting place.IF you ask me why?I willl tell you I am happy.follow me,I have three opinion,first I'm very like along with my friend,because they not only knownlegebal,but also no lack of fun.second my hometown is beautiful,there have many river and hills,we can go fishing in the river when the rainy day,on the contrary,wo can go to the hill top see the first sun ,in a word ,my hometown is wanderful .last but not least,take them to see me hometown can enhance it visibility,my hometown is famous all over the world.