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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46235
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加高级词汇的使用量;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。

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The value of university life At the first,I did not agree with that there is no sense to go into college. Apart from acquiring knowledge,we can learn many things which can not be learned out of university. First of all,as we all known that college can provide a passage to us students to learn major knowledge. Secondly,only go to college can we given a permission to get into library,in that way,we can read whatever we want,we can stay with books day and night,otherwise,we can touch knowledge by ourselves. Thirdly,we can join in various club which we are interested in,through that,we can learn another personal skill which maybe will become our living sources. Fourthly,we can learn how to live in society. It is said that university is like a small society which you can learn to how to get along with your roommates,how to handle your social intercourse. Last but not least,we had studied twelve years for College Entrance Examination,we had no reason to give up an advanced education opportunity. Take all consideration into conclusion,our students should take the chance and make effort into study rather than complain about college life.

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