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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。

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At recent days, I always think of a question about why more and more college students are becoming decadent day by day. There are some reasons coming to my mind. First, I think why the students are so decadent is that in the college they have much free time which can be arranged by themselves. And with so much free time they own,what's more,the things they want to do are so many that they can not decide to do what. The reason I think it must be joking. Second,in my opinion,most of them are too lazy to do the hard work. At the beginning of college life, they may have plenty of ideas,but as time goes by,they found that their thoughts are too perfect to achieve. Thus they do nothing,becoming much more lazier. However,though in the college,we have much free time, we should take good advantage of them. Because we are not children any more,we are college student and we are adults.

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