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2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:33浏览次数:3091
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题目 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online?
说明 Nowadays the Internet has become part of people's life, and millions of young people have made friends online.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分85.5分
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可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达丰富,高级词汇积累做的也很棒;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Recent years have seen a heated topic on whether it is wise or not to make friends online.The supporters believe the students can build the ability of expression via making friends online. The other side,however,frowns at it,saying that it will exert bad effect on the students. Personally,it occurs to me that making friend online is wise. Firstly,it can enhance the ability of expression which the contemporary students especially lack of. A case in point is the people who are naturally bashful. They can defuse awkward situations that may happen in reality by communicating online. And it dawns on me that the relationships between people can be more easily to approach through chatting online. Secondly, we can make friends of all kind,especially the person from different countries. It is favorable for foreign language learning as well as the understanding of foreign culture. What’s more, it is a considerable method for cultural fusion. In addition,it turns out to be time-saving. It just spends several seconds in communicating online while we are stuck for finding the opportunities to make friends in reality. Taking into account all these relevant factors which affect and contribute to the attitude,we may safely conclude that making friends online can yet be regarded as a wise choice. And with the improvement of network security,it will more safer and efficient.

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