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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40880
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错。

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It's important that you should have confidence to do something,confidence is believing in yourself, you can do better with confidence. Teachers should teach their students with confidence,then , the student will believe what you have said. The staff should do his work with confidence, then,the manager will give you more important job, you are getting closer to success. Well, I don't write this to tell you that you can get everything by being confident. The premise of being succeed is that you should work hard enough. Without confidence, there is little opportunity to get ahead. You may be qualified to do this job, but you are not confident , the boss likes one who is more confident than others. In my opinion, we should study hard and work hard,which can make us more confident. If you want to be succeed,don't forget to take confidence around you.

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