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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
The other day,we saw a movie named The Great Debaters,which made me thought a lot of it. The story reflected segregation between the White and the Black. In this film,there was a professor in the Black college,who was excellent in debate and poem. Moreover he wanted to arouse the whole Blacks to fight with the injustice law. Thus he led a debate team,and they won a lot of competitions. What is more,the debaters in the film were all good at debating,under the guidance of the professor. The most impressive sentence in this film is: "An injustice law is not a law"which made me feel pity for the Blacks. They had lived a terrible environment. During watching,I also thought if there was one day,there would not have racism,and the Black and the White had a class in the same college and class. How wonderful they are! What's more,the law will be more legal and peace,the society will be much safer
