文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Dear.John I was happy when I received your invention.Thank you very much.However there is going to be an important exam the day before tomorrow and I haven't prepared for it so I have to review the knowledge in two days and can't go for the dinner with you.I'm quite sorry,please forgive me. I heard that Jame and Michael would go to your home and had the dinner with your family.So enjoy a good night with them.If it is possible,please take some photos for me. I will have time next Sunday,if you too,let's have a nice dinner that day. Yours Li Hua