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2003年专业四级英语作文真题:保持好心情

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:19浏览次数:3976
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题目 The importance of keeping a good mood.
说明 People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career, or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances. Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a composition of about 150 words on the following topic: The importance of keeping a good mood.
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
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拼写方面做得很棒,平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中衔接词丰富。

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The importance of keeping a good mood A medical survey shows that with the rapid development of society,more and more people are under the working,studying,housing or transportation pressure. Hence,it's vital for us to adjust ourselves to keep a good mood. First of all,keeping a good mood is a magic key to help us become healthier. A research shows that the more time you are exposed to uncomfortable conditions,the more possibilities you will get illness such as hypertension or heart disease. No matter how lousy the circumstance is,be certain to keep a good mood. Furthermore,people usually do things more efficient when they are in a good mood. When your heart beat as painfully as a recruit going under fire for the first time,you will scarcely concentrate on the work you are doing and be easy to get bored. On the contrary,being joyful can make you feel more energetic and confident when you are working. Last but not least,if you keep a good mood all the time,you will impress people around you an active and optimistic feeling. A sweet smile can shorten the distance between two people in a short time.So it is likely to make more friends and have more harmonious relationship if you are always in a good mood. As far as I'm concerned,keeping a good mood can make you healthier and happier. You can enjoy your life better. So being a happy person no matter how miserable you are suffering.

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