采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加从句的使用;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
Recently,a saying that "Knowledge is a treasure,but practice is the key to it"has been discussed fiercely.From my perspective,the implied meaning of the sentence is that hardly can we master ture knowledge without overwhelming practice in our daily life. From my point of view,a multitude of examples can be found to illustrate the point.We all have the same experience that we usually intend to attain a perfect score in college.However,it is difficult for us to finish a task in laborary for the simple reason that we lack in practicing in daily life.If we intend to master knowlege completely,we should attain more importance to practice when we have plenty of free time after school.In addition,with the development of science and technology,a host of people,youngsters particularly,fail to realize the indispensable role played by practice.When we carry out practice,some new ideas can be found casually,which is of importance for us to pursue success. From what we have discussed above,we can easily come to the conclusion that intending to master knowledge quickly,we should cultivate the habit of practice in daily life.Only in this way,can we have our future fruitfully and perfectly.
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