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文章丰富的词汇表达请发扬，高级词汇使用也比较准确；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错。
When it comes to the topic of happiness,everyone has his own explanation.An aspiring idea goes that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them,which reveals the nature of happiness. It is no denying that we may encounter many problems,but that doesn't mean that we are deprived of happiness.They have set great examples for us as below.Nelmon Mandela,was sentenced to 27 years in prison and he was optimistic and became successful in fighting against recial segregation.Steven Job was abandoned by his biological parents and droped out of university but still managed to change the world. In conclusions,it is necessary to equip ourselves with the capacities to cope with problems.To be more special,we should be cooperative,persistant and have a positive attitude.Only when we are proficient with dealing with problems can we live a merry life.
