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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4832
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章衔接手法恰当;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the topic of happiness,everyone has his own explanation.An aspiring idea goes that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them,which reveals the nature of happiness.Happiness will be achieved only by showing great courage to confront problems and developing the capacity to solve them. It is no denying that we may encounter many problems,but that doesn't mean that we are deprived of happiness.They have set great examples for us as below.Nelmon Mandela,was sentenced to 27 years in prison and he was optimistic and became successful in fighting against racial segregation.Steven Job was abandoned by his biological parents and droped out of university but still managed to change the world.In our life,no one is immune to problems,but we may achieve our lives through endeavouring. In conclusions,it is necessary to equip ourselves with the capacities to cope with problems.To be more special,we should be cooperative,persistent and have a positive attitude toward problems.Only when we are proficient with dealing with problems can we live a merry life.

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