2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，高级词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。

From the picture that the father talk with his son about attitude of life,we can know the phenomenon that some teenages always image some unrealistic things and ignore current things now. There is no doubt that we should have the ambitious dreams,but only the people that have accomplisied present things make their dreams come true.In the first place,the unrealistic people can not accomplish their work and school work.In the second place,the unrealistic people do not a wide horizon and scholarly knowledge.Last but not least,the unrealistic people lack of a precious perseverance. As far as I am concerned,nothing is more important than the fact that grasping the present.Thus,I think that only the people grasping the present make their dream come ture.