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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16952
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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From the picture that the father talk with his son about attitude of life,we can know the phenomenon that some teenagers always image some unrealistic things and ignore current things now. There is no doubt that we should have the ambitious dreams,but only the people that have accomplished present things make their dreams come true.In the first place,the unrealistic people can not accomplish their aim and school work.In the second place,the unrealistic people do not a broad horizon and scholarly knowledge.Last but not least,the unrealistic people lack a precious perseverance. As far as I am concerned,nothing is more important than the fact grasping the present.Thus,I think that only the people grasping the present make their dream come true.

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