作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
From the picture that the father talk with his son about attitude of life,we can know the phenomenon that some teenagers always image some unrealistic things and ignore current things now. There is no doubt that we should have the ambitious dreams,but only the people that have accomplished present things make their dreams come true.In the first place,the unrealistic people can not accomplish their aim and school work.In the second place,the unrealistic people do not a broad horizon and scholarly knowledge.Last but not least,the unrealistic people lack a precious perseverance. As far as I am concerned,nothing is more important than the fact grasping the present.Thus,I think that only the people grasping the present make their dream come true.