句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇。
I don't know if there is a generation gap, but there are a lot of differences between me and my parents. For example, I am fond of rock music, and my parents don't even think it's music.In addition, my parents don't like me to wear, so they will start to talk about me as usual. Although I and my parents can not agree on a lot of things, still can keep our communication channels open. If there is a communication barrier between parents and children, the problem may be even greater.