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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71641
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。

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I don't know if there is a generation gap, but there are a lot of distinctions between me and my parents. For example, I am fond of(appeal) rock music, and my parents don't even think it's music. In addition, my parents don't like me to wear, so they will start to talk about me as usual.I and my parents can not agree on a lot of things, however still can keep our communication channels open. If there is a communication barrier between parents and children, the problem may be even greater.

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