建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中衔接词丰富;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇。
Whether there is a shortcut to learn Nowadays,the phenomenon,students are crazy in getting high grades without working hard,rises wide concern.People have diverse opinions on whether there is a shortcut to learn.As far as I am concerned,I agree with the picture that getting good grades without working hard is in the fiction section meaning there is no shortcut to learn. There are several reasons in the following statements.To begin with,many famous people set good examples of deligence.For example,Edison always said"Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration".Edison invented the light bulb with 1500 times failing on finding a suitable lamp filament material.After his deligence and insistance,he found that the Japanese bamboo charcoal was the best filament.Until 1906,Edison improved the light bulb,which has been in use to this day.Due to his hard working and insistence, he got ahead.What's more,Nelson Mendela insisted in battling against the racial contemn for a long year. To sum up,sums of examples of celebrities tell us the true that only students working hard,can they get good grades and succeed.