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When talking about investment, people always say that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. It looks like reasonable and unshakeable. Everything has a risk to fail and not focus on one thing will help you to dramatically decrease the risk. As a result of it, you will keep safe and even have a chance to win in one of these baskets. But it is really a truth? In my opinion, it is not always right. Though it has more chance to win, it also means you can't win a lot. Due to the limit of money or other resources, the return of one win basket must be much smaller than all in one win basket. We have to admit it is risky, but it can really make a difference if you win. Build your career, learn a skill and a lot of other things in life also the same as investment. Somethings only when you put all you have in one basket and try you best can you have the chance to bite the sweet of success.
