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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

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When talking about investment, people always say that it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. It looks like be reasonable and unshakeable. Everything takes a risk to fail and not focus on one thing will help you to dramatically decrease the risk. As a result of it, you will keep safe and even have a chance to win in one of these baskets. But it is really a truth? In my opinion, it is not always right. Though it has more chance to win, it also means you can't win a lot. Due to the limit of money or other resources, the return of one win basket must be much smaller than all in one win basket. We have to admit it is risky, but it can really make a difference if you win. Building your career, learning a skill and a lot of other things in life also the same as investment. Sometimes only when you put all you have in one basket and try you best can you have the chance to bite the sweet of success.

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